Bob Hoskins (Tribute drawing) Black and white

My tribute to the late Bob Hoskins, first film I saw him in was who framed roger rabbit and that's why I chose to draw this one.

I made a hell of a lot of mistakes on this drawing when I started, 15 or so reattempts at it, failed again earlier today, the final pic I finished today after that when I restarted took just under half an hour (half a day for the other attempts and a few hours for the earlier attempts today), lineart done in flash, smoohted lines on inkskape this is the black and white one I'll do the full colour one later.

I'm going to send this pic to Richard Williams (Director of animation of who framed roger rabbit) and see what he thinks, I got this from an early scene and tried to get it as accurate as possible (I still can't get the nose right but everything else improved a lot more in time), but this is honestly the best I'm going to get it.